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Number five was about an imaginary chimpanzee, though.

*is represented generously* *appreciates* *thanks author* :p

UNORIGINAL yeee, kidding

Thanks for pointing out that typo. I fixed it and edited some other dialogue as well. I actually forgot what Jason laughed at so I had to re-read the chapter. ...

Oct. 15, 2015 I've edited some of the dialooooguuue! Also added a bit of Avery-speech somewhere in there. Not entirely worth a re-read, but yee.

37 likes? O.o What happened to not liking this?! XP

No problem! ^^

Incredible. And Space Oddity is most definitely a beautiful song.

*there's no children narrating any of my stuff ;-; I don't write about children ;-;*

It was written by a sarcastic teenager, though. :p It wasn't meant to seem like a little kid narrating it, I actually envisioned a young adult or something... "I'd not ...

Overall, this review is a big no.

Those last two stanzas, though. Love 'em.

*actually >.>

Yeah, "shrill" was annoying... When I said Riley flew to their house or whatever, when the dream started, I meant they just awoke there like "whoa", not actualy flew there. ...

Not an owl. XP It's a Pooto, and it can look absolutely terrifying. ;-;