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Re: Welcome to Night Vale Airlines! [Part I]
Oh no, haha. No problems, though! Real world stuff is Top Priority. This'll still be around if you ever wanna come back to it, anyway, so there's literally no rush
Jul 22, 2018 -
Re: Welcome to Night Vale Airlines! [Part I]
-hint hint-
Jul 22, 2018 -
Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 2
!! Glad to have been of help! Lot of things were cleared up here, haha, thankss for the clarification. I responded on Discord to most of this, but will say ...
Jul 18, 2018 -
Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1
Oh, thanks
Jul 13, 2018 -
Re: inhaling the cosmos
Thanks for the review! I caught this on the people tab before even getting the notif, wowwee. Yeah, a lot of my poem attempts are just, like, messing around with ...
Jun 10, 2018 -
Re: inhaling the cosmos
Oh, heck, I didn't think of it sounding like a black hole. That's a good interpretation. I'm honestly such a poem noob that I,,, don't really have a set meaning ...
Jun 9, 2018 -
Re: inhaling the cosmos
I'm hoping to edit this for publication and I don't want extra copies floating around, so screenshotting and sharing isn't v comfortable, lel.
Jun 9, 2018 -
Re: inhaling the cosmos
Thanks for the review. Uhhh, plz don't screenshot and share with your friendsss--
Jun 9, 2018 -
Re: inhaling the cosmos
Thanks for the review! Somehow I've still not grasped the fact that oh poems need emotions too so OOPs, haha. But thank you for pointing that out. I'll try to ...
Jun 9, 2018 -
Re: Flower Boy [Part 2]
Ohh, gotcha. Yeah, I think "his" still works better for the pants, whether they're actually his or not. And yeah, good edit! Excited for part thrreee--
May 27, 2018 -
Re: Whims of Mortality - Part I
Heyaaa, thanks for the review, ally! I'm really glad that my characters (Dale in particular) have been getting such good feedback so far. I was hoping that I'd written them ...
May 17, 2018 -
Re: Whims of Mortality - Part I
Thanks for the review! I can definitely see how those bits were too tell-y and I'll try to fix that! The thing with Arnold knowing the blond kid was too ...
May 16, 2018 -
Re: Whims of Mortality - Part I
!! Thanks for the review! Was helpful for catching some of those typos that slipped by me, and yeaah oops I wasn't sure about that one sentence you call a ...
May 15, 2018 -
Re: on the wire [part two]
waaait I googled and I was sort of aware but didn't know that was the phrase for it, oops-- sorry about my misinterpretation, lel
May 14, 2018 -
Re: on the wire [part two]
ohh, I wasn't aware that was a thing, so oops-- no prob for the review! lel
May 14, 2018
