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*manage? XP

*Francisco it's okay, I had to Google the correct spelling >>

Hi! I used "'fore" instead of "before" because I thought the extra syllable threw off the flow, but I'm not sure. As for the question about whether the house had ...

Hahaha, that concussion suggestion could actually work a bit. I wasn't too happy with how I worked towards the end of the chapter, so maybe I'll edit it that way ...

The point is for it to be "you", not a boy or girl.

Is this another review you wrote before review day and just saved to post now? There was a character swap here and it took me about three rereads to realize ...

"They called him the nose man, quite often enough, cause the rest of his features were just far too much." The Nose Man boom

i wasnt really trying to rhyme. i wanted the words to sorta kinda rhyme but not exactly and bleh. and how do "eyes" and "despise" not rhyme and the opposite ...

@JimHull, I don't see how changing the number of "uhs" and "ums" would effect the awesomeness of my story. And Yams never mentioned anything about language...? But okay. And this ...

Hallooo, thank youuu. This was all actually inspired by HGTTG, so... XP and yeah, the Doctor's description thing you got the reference ooo: didn't feel right but I wasn't sure ...

Hallooo, thank youuu. This was all actually inspired by HGTTG, so... XP and yeah, the Doctor's description thing you got the reference ooo: didn't feel right but I wasn't sure ...

uuuuuuugh, sorry, i forgot about jason saying "oh my nephew!" that was just a random thing he said, like "oh my god" but "nephew" 'cause he's jason. dorothy/roman isn't his ...

oh, and no, it's not "pretty obvious" that roman is jason's nephew. because he's not.

*sigh* in order for jason to hit his head after ripping off part of the steak, he'd have to fly back in his seat. no, dorothy does not have alter ...

FRICKIN' LIIIIT I particularly liked the seventh stanza; Once the tire has treaded bare to the rim and my fists start bleeding over the wheel, it's a sign that the ...