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i don't see the freaking point in mentioning that i double posted, but congrats on your observation skills.

i didn't mean to double post. it's called 'my internet is lagging'.

no. as in the name i decided on.

no. as in the name i decided on.

yeah that was a typo i didnt catch in proofreading. thanks.

apparently yws doesnt like apostrophes * "I know more than you'd be comfortable knowing I know". the multiple "i know"s were on purpose.

everyone but avery is an alien %u2018I know more than you'd be comfortable knowing I know%u2019 is also a bit wordy, mostly because you say %u2018I know%u2019 twice. ^ that ...

he isn't dangerous. he's being hunted by dangerous people and that puts avery in danger.

Hahah "won't do it again" but you did it with mine 3 minutes later

Thanks for ripping off my review c:

i tend to just list random things and try to form a story from it so thats why subterfuge was paired with the other things

BUT IT'S NOT FIXED, IT STILL SAYS "straightjacket" THERE'S NO G OR H xp also, was working on review, so there you go c:

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Yeah.. Review.. Cool.. Thanks..

Thanks for the review! ^^ Writing it, I felt like the beginning wasn't really very good, and that it was missing something -- probably the whole "how Theodore met Death" ...