HarmonicWriting

Werewolves! Yay! I love werewolves and this seems to be better than most werewolve stories because it's got that real-life addition to it. I loved the POV switching too. The ...

I'm more drawn into this than before. I really want to know what Ryder's secret is and what he's looking for. The romance in this is good because if they ...

I really like this. The dialogue is perfect and I'm really interested in knowing more about Ryder. There's a tiny hint of romance in this and I like it. There ...

Hmm... This was interesting. I really like the plot that seems to be starting, especially with the whole murderer thing. I really liked the letters, but I think if you ...

I've never read anything quite like that. I loved the whole meaning of it and I could definitely relate to it. The only thing is, some of it seemed to ...

I think everyone pretty much said everything there is to be said about this. You need to develop your characters a bit more. Descibe them. Show don't tell. Don't start ...

That was really great. The first paragraph was really catchy, enough to keep the reader hooked. The langauge and style you use are amazing. I love it. It's not plain ...

I'll be honest, this poem wasn't amazing but it wasn't awful either. I could tell there was some meaning behind it. However, I'm not sure it flowed together as well ...

Yeah, that was the Epilogue. Jacob won't be telling the story I don't think. I'm pretty sure Stephenie debunked that. That Epilogue was just to make us feel sorry for ...