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Also, (2) I've messaged a moderator about it, and they should change it for me. ;)

Also, (2) I've messaged a moderator about it, and they should change it for me. ;)

(1) I don't think this is any cause for offense. Why did you include "OCD" in the preview if you know that that's not a symptom of OCD? I mean, ...

(see, this is why you need a gender-neutral pronoun, English) I think the best we have is "they".

*Double post*

Thanks for the clarification! I just read over the review, and I realized it was quite short. Sorry about that, I hope it was helpful--I love your work. :D

Well, let me know when it does come out. I want more of your awesome writing! :D

Thank /you/ for writing such an awesome first chapter. Have you finished the second?

Sorry, I wasn't really clear. I meant that that was an opportunity for you to say something like "Forget razors. They didn't even give us water to wash our faces." ...

...I was literally just watching this one. Like, it was one of my open tabs. >.>

It was an awesome review, and thank you so much for it. Shame you're dropping out of the contest--I always look forward to your feedback. :(

Great first review, Lorelie! Keep it up!

Hey, thanks for the review! I'll post a more detailed reply shortly, but quick question: was this written for the Big Review? I'm fairly sure I saw a message from ...

Oh, hey- one last thing I forgot to mention: this sonnet's language is by me. Only the tone and subject matter are supposed to echo his sonnet. Have a great ...

Hey, sorry I didn't reply to you earlier. I talked about my decision to call the sonnet "Shakespearean" above. Thanks for the review! :D