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Re: You never told me
Hi! I like this short story because it conveys a lot using so few words. I understood the emotions and thoughts of the narrator really well. When you wrote, "Then ...
Jul 6, 2017 -
Re: Jeans
- I am not sure if this is a poem because it does not really have a specific format to it. Are you starting a new line every time there ...
Jun 18, 2017 -
Re: Accordion
Some small mistakes I see: - I think superhero and superpower is one word, not two. - "But then; life....." There should be comma here, not a semicolon. - "It ...
Jun 18, 2017