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I've only got time to review one more poem of yours now, Kylan, because this time it's 4:30 in the morning and I'm starting to feel dizzy. windmills along the ...

Kylan, my dearest, darling-est moonblossom. I'm so sorry I've neglected this thread, but just for you I'm going to stay up a little later [it's already 4am] and review a ...

Gosh, Kylan! I love your summer poems. They're beautiful and have exactly the taste of summer that I love and want and need and actually miss out on so I ...

Wow. Like, you don't even understand. This is how I'm feeling. This is what I'm going through right now, twisted a bit, but the emotion is still there. The thing ...

This was written under the assumption that most of the people would not be looking at the picture. The site the prompt/contest is on does not allow linking at all ...

^___^ Elen, what we usually do at YWS when we have multiple chapters is post them on different threads. That means for chapter one, you go up to 'writing', then ...

I think I'll just change it to a dialogue tag, as you suggest. Also, yes, the calamus is just that end bit of the quill; I figured Kymnir would have ...

I want everyone to know that I hate this sentence, too. But I couldn't find anything better that could tie together the main idea of the story. I would love ...

Hey guys! ^_^ Thank you for taking a look at this piece. I'll definitely be taking some of your suggestions to heart, but I just want to say that this ...

Hey, I'm back for one more round! Just a few more things I caught. Sorry I've taken so long to get back here. >_

^_^ Well, I'm back for more. I do appreciate the changes you made and I especially like the section you added! To be honest, it's the most interesting and relevant ...

^___________^ Eeeh, thanks for all the comments on this, everyone!

Hello, again! ^_^ I definitely like it a lot better now that you've edited it. It just seems a lot smoother and easier to read through, but you still kept ...

Alright, for this scene, I'm not sure where they are. Are they in the art room? Are they in the car? Is this before or after he said he loved ...

This poem tells how easily trust can be broken ^^ I like it. The word flow on some of the stanzas are a little bit, rough. Try picking words with ...