Hannah

Yup, I like your humor, Spinelli. I like your dedication to satire, but if this is a poem making fun of poetry, I am not going to be able to ...

I am going to try to skim through the prologue and get to your first chapter since I see Pingu covered that. But I do want to echo that this ...

Mochi, your first stanza starts out SO strongly. Is that the line this poem originated from? Because it's beautiful, full of motion, imagery, and meaning. The second follows very closely, ...

I like the opening of this poem a lot. "People say this, but oh they are TOTALLY wrong!" haha. And your rhymes in that first stanza are easy and unnoticeable, ...

Hey there! I am going to say right now that I played WoW for a little bit in the past, but I did not pick up on any lore or ...

So, at first I really, really hated the attempts at references. I think you'll get that from anyone who doesn't understand them easily. Just be aware of the audience you ...

Hey, hi, hello! Hannah here~ So, you have good intent here. I am especially connected to this poem, 'cause I know a friend of mine whose boyfriend says to her ...

Here's my feedback! She crossed the room, Meeting him at the window, A smile adorning her face. The sunlight, The lawn, The skies, But wisps of clouds dappled the blue. ...

You have a good start to this, but for some reason I think you miss the moments you can most clearly bring your dad into focus for us. Right now, ...

What. What is that ending? What even is that ending, Audy? If you find value in it, I'd suggest trying to put that value/meaning into different words, because for me, ...

To mingle our blood in the same vessel, Pingu. This is to declare our sisterhood before the eyes of all Green Room Knights. That said, why'd you go and give ...

I like that even though there are barely any images in this piece, the ones that are here are clear and striking. The rawness on her wrists and the attempt ...

I am on board with the first two. I heard from someone that haikus should do this thing where they give you an image, and then a twist, and your ...

You know. When I was little I read parts of the third Harry Potter book before I ever went back and discovered the first book. This feels a little like ...

1. This is very late! I'm sorry. I had this in my tabs, then moved it to review drafts, but I'm here at last and I hope you've not stopped ...