Hannah

This is something anything could write. This is the narrative of hundreds of romances. Everyone has a love. Many of them go through high school and college. Many many many. ...

This is lovely. Even without the notes, I think you can communicate the feeling in this poem well (mostly owing to the fact that we can get the general meaning ...

I'm very confused as to why you chose a tone completely separate from the tone of jazz to write about jazz. Was it a conscious effort on your part? What ...

This is the emotion you want behind your poem, but this is not your poem. This could be written in prose as a blog entry, except for the one shining ...

I really enjoy the underlying simplicity of this poem. The fact that it's based on one very accessible narrative -- the climb, the rejection, the fall -- makes it very ...

Hi, Knight Nite! Sorry it took me a bit to get to your request. I first have to say the words stuck out, and not just 'cause we know them ...

There's a lot I like about this poem, Audy. I like the specificity of words you use, and the boldness with which you choose them. You don't back down into ...

Yo! What even is all this?! This is like, exactly my style, and even though I can't quite clearly follow the events like I might be able to follow a ...

So at first I was going to do that thing where I tell you to take absolutely all of the adjectives and adverbs out, but then I realized some of ...

Whoo, alrighty then. Seems like there's some frustration here. The first thing I did that made me feel good about this effort was read the number of words and realize ...

So! This sounds like it was probably just a rant and so maybe you were okay with not receiving reviews on it, right? But it's been lost so long that ...

Hey, Tenyo. This is awesome! So much about this is tight and clear, and it's a nice short retelling of the fairy tale, so that's awesome. I especially like the ...

Hey, FrenchDaisy, welcome to YWS~ I'm glad you've already posted your first work, and I hope you'll get out there and post some reviews on others' works soon! PM me ...

Hi, Breshae. Welcome to YWS. Hope you get out there and give some reviews on other people's works soon! As for this, the first thing I have to ask you ...

Hi, GPG! Here's the one thing that's weird about this poem for me: you keep switchin' up the rhyme scheme. In the first stanza of this, it's nice and straight ...