Hannah

Hey! I was in here a long time ago to look at your first chapter -- I remember there was a lot of tension about unsolved things, so I like ...

Okay, okay. I'm liking this chapter better than the other. And I noticed something to. While in literary fiction, the scenes that you create (like the woman at the desk ...

I just wanted to quickly comment on this before moving on to the next chapters. I like a lot of the details you bring in -- don't get me wrong ...

Hey there, mystical magical wizard of oz who posts work on review day! I'm gonna pop on in here with a review courtesy of the Knights of the Green Room! ...

Hey, Dragon! Back for one more essay before I head over to my boyfriend's house for some nice TV time. hehe. So, I like that after making my way through ...

Hey there, Blue Africa! What I really want to say right off the bat is that I love how solidly you've set up your character. I like the list of ...

Okay! I'm hitting up your essays now. I really hope that all the reviews you get today can start to pay you back for all the advice you've brought to ...

Clamping my mouth shut, I walked up onto the stage to stand beside her. I dare you to go into this word document and ctrl+f to find "my mouth shut" ...

Hey! Doesn’t his story world get a name now? You’ve been stalling long enough.” Fiera said. “I generated some names just for you. Pick one.” I told her. “That’s perfect! ...

Okay! I just wanted to say I noticed this before I finished reading the chapter and MAYBE the chapter can end up changing my mind, but at this point, this ...

:( Oh no~ After such an intriguing and interesting chapter, we're back to the narrator's thoughts and figuring stuff out about his own writing and referencing things that are only ...

First of all, I was interested to see the description of this chapter as you were tempted to end here, so I'm excited to see what's in store. That was ...

Poppin' in again. The first thing I liked about this chapter was definitely not the reference to a review I hadn't even read. haha. I guess if that reviewer came ...

So after a couple of chapters with non-events, this one packs a double punch, and I'm happy for it. The first awesomeness that hits us is the introduction to the ...

Hey -- are you a translator? That's wickedly awesome. I hope to study more and eventually be able to at least practice translating Korean literature. The first thing I want ...