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Hey, Bumpeh! I always have a soft spot for people writing to their sisters, 'cause I love my sisters too, even though I don't think they'd appreciate a poem. It's ...

Oooh, nice voice, TheWeather! My favorite lines are about how a "psychopath is better than no path at all" and the honesty of "just two suicidal kids who told/ other ...

Awww, that's encouraging! I like that you kept this piece short and sweet -- it was really about just the contrast between being scared once and then facing your fears, ...

Hey there, QuillFlame22995! This is a poem that can really bring out the pride in a lot of young writers. It basically describes everything we have to be proud of, ...

Magpie! I like it! I like especially the image of being marinated in cigarette smoke, because it's not just poetic, it totally happens, right? It seeps into your clothing and ...

Hey, Magpie, this is pretty darn solidly awesome. I first wanted to say something about "heterozygous" -- I mean, I wanted to say it would be cool for readers who ...

BEST LINE: i found rope in my closet and was curious as to why i had so many shadows hanging there. Super deliciously great. I love that we assume the ...

Hmm. I'm wondering if you wouldn't want to focus a poem just on the tight-rope walker. That seems to be the character with the most story potential and who also ...

Um, oh my god. That ending. Haha. So, I'm gonna leave some of my thoughts and hope that some of them will be helpful for you. First, I feel like ...

Hey there, catcha01! The idea of this piece of writing is definitely something emotional. To have someone you love no longer able to remember the things that make you love ...

Hey, Magpie. You're right that this has some potential! I'm gonna give my thoughts on it and hopefully they will be helpful to you as you think about this poem ...

Hmm. Sweet and short, yeah. I'm gonna give a few of my thoughts and you can also think about them, see if you agree or disagree, and so what you ...

Hey there again! Hopefully I can help you out again~ Okay, okay, I think I finally figured out what confused me the first time through. I got confused because the ...

Hey there, MusicManda7! Glad to see your work shared with us! Be sure to get out there and read and review other members' work, too, 'cause you can learn a ...

Hmmm. Very very interesting. What's good is that the first stanza and the last stanza, for different reasons, are completely awesome and engaging! The first stanza is great because we're ...