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I didn't get the joke at the end. >_< But I also don't know what a Honchkrow is 'cause I haven't played any more recent versions of Pokemon! I guess ...

Hi, recreating! I noticed you were looking for some specific feedback on exactly where this work was confusing, and I remembered asking people for exactly the same thing when I ...

Hey, Zolen! I noticed your note at the end. I have to admit that I don't have any real ideas what this song is about, but I do know it's ...

haha, I wonder if the reason you don't have any reviews on this piece is because you said we'd all have to get memory wiped if we read any further! ...

Ho ho ho~ Another acrostic! The first thing we notice is that this doesn't have the same contrast in texture as the other -- the diction of this poem is ...

Ouch! This is actually pretty heavy. I like very much the contrast in texture between the modern-ish phrase and frame of the acrostic -- pocket change -- and the very ...

Hey, Knight Dragon! It's good to read some of your writing again! So, my first thought from my read through was how I loved that this was a piece that ...

Hey there, and congratulations on getting up the courage to post this piece on YWS! Hopefully some suggestions and comments that you receive will be helpful to you in editing ...

Hey, there, icannothearthings! I loved stumbling across this because I recently subscribed to a channel on YouTube that does really educational and engaging videos about consumerism, economy, etc. So

I hope that this wasn't written about a personal experience. I really hope not, because this poem is really painful to read and understand, especially after we're introduced to the ...

I appreciate this! The first thing I want to say is that I love how you made the non-binary pronouns FIRST and FOREMOST, but still supported them, for now, with ...

Um, yep, came here because I am a big fan of Dali. I know this clock painting is very famous, but I'm more of a fan of his long-legged elephant ...

I absolutely ridiculously with an enormous amount of my heart love this poem. I love that you worked it out to rhyme in both languages, and how each version has ...

I tried to read through this once and was not very interested. I tried to read through it again and again my mind turned away. One of the thing that ...

I'm back for part two~ I bet you missed me! I have to say that I loved the opening. That dream sequence was full of vivid and clear images. I ...