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Re: Juliet
Of papermache and of plaster paints. The hands brush the knobaly railing. -Those hands that are not mine, But borrowed for tonight and the next, Till I become weary of ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Untitled
^_^ Let me help some! ^_^ I /love/ this premise. I was sitting on the city bus. I didn't know exactly where I was headed, but I just felt the ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: A Prayer Answered.
^_^ Can I help too~ I often wondered if he felt the same way as me, if he laid in bed every night thinking about my smile the way I ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Mind you I went all the way to my overdue library book records to find the title of this book for you, so there was a bit of effort put ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Scoffing at the Inside Self
Just some input from a newbie~ examining the fingers of the hand that was not hovering over the red pen. This felt a bit awkward to me, as if the ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Morning
Well, I don't really have any mechanical advice to give, but I'm hoping that my reaction might help you and give you an idea as to how your poem sounds ...
Jan 18, 2009 -
Re: Intergalactic Musings
Ahaha, I super love this little poem! ^_^ I love it because of the juxtaposition of the age-old topic of stars and the solar system, and how everyone wonders at ...
Jan 18, 2009
