User avatar

Hannah

green room warrior

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Heaving Ardor

    Hey, Baile! I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to get to this, but I'm hoping you could still use some advice on this piece. :] If not, let ...

    Jul 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 1}

    Hey, Shina! My apologies for not getting to this sooner. >_< Had a lot on my plate. But hopefully you're still looking for feedback on it! I'm going to just ...

    Jul 17, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Let Me Leave with Spectrum Shades [Accidentally Bumped]

    Silly Evikins, thinking I'd pass up the opportunity to read some of her work and offer my comments. I know it's taken a while for me to stop by and ...

    Mar 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: .

    Hey, Rosey. My apologies for taking so long to get to this poem. >_< I hope that you still need some feedback, since I see you've already gotten several comments ...

    Jul 15, 2009
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: Goodbye

    Hey there, Palip. My apologies for taking so long to get around to reviewing this. Hopefully you can still use some feedback. Let's see what I can do! I. Little ...

    Jul 15, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Book of Raziel - Prologue [Rewrote]

    Hey there, Tuna! I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to get to this piece, but hopefully you can still use some feedback. I see that you've gotten a ...

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In the Boxes Under the Bed

    Hey, Weare! Welcome to YWS! I noticed this post on the front page and thought I would stop in to add a few comments before I go to bed. ^____^ ...

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Time goes by

    Hey, Nimphal. I'm sorry it's taken so long for me to get to your review. Hopefully you're still open to some feedback. I'll do what I can! : D I. ...

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The End of Time Chapter One

    Hey, Bickazer. I'm so very sorry about how long it's taken me to get to this to review it, but hopefully you can still use some feedback. If you want ...

    Jul 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Shoulda Been Simple: Chapter One

    Hey there! Hannah, here as requested. ^___^ I. Little Things The heart-stopping oddity of this situation was that she was talking to my parents in the living room when I ...

    Jun 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: No one...

    Hey there! ^_^ My name's Hannah! Alright, let's get right down to business. There are two main ways that a repetitive poem like this can end: either the message stays ...

    Jun 28, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: 1:00

    Hey, Jester! Saw this on the front page and thought I'd pop in. I'm Hannah, by the way. ^_^ The moon’s soft glow mingled with the blinding gleam of my ...

    Jun 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Pink Toes in Green Grass

    Hey there, Alyssa! I saw this on the front page and I thought I'd drop in. ^_^ Hopefully I can be of some assistance. I'm Hannah, by the way. =] ...

    Jun 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Here where he will meet me

    Hey there. =] I'm Hannah~ I caught this on the front page and it interested me, but after reading through it, I can't help but feel a little let down. ...

    Jun 28, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: .

    Hey, Rosey. I don't remember if I've ever critiqued any of your work before, but even if I have, I'm here now. ^_^ Let's see what I can do for ...

    Jun 28, 2009


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
— Unknown