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Re: Heaving Ardor
Hey, Baile! I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to get to this, but I'm hoping you could still use some advice on this piece. :] If not, let ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Kingdom of Gold {chapter 1}
Hey, Shina! My apologies for not getting to this sooner. >_< Had a lot on my plate. But hopefully you're still looking for feedback on it! I'm going to just ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Leave with Spectrum Shades [Accidentally Bumped]
Silly Evikins, thinking I'd pass up the opportunity to read some of her work and offer my comments. I know it's taken a while for me to stop by and ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: .
Hey, Rosey. My apologies for taking so long to get to this poem. >_< I hope that you still need some feedback, since I see you've already gotten several comments ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Goodbye
Hey there, Palip. My apologies for taking so long to get around to reviewing this. Hopefully you can still use some feedback. Let's see what I can do! I. Little ...
Jul 15, 2009 -
Re: Book of Raziel - Prologue [Rewrote]
Hey there, Tuna! I'm sorry that it's taken me so long to get to this piece, but hopefully you can still use some feedback. I see that you've gotten a ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: In the Boxes Under the Bed
Hey, Weare! Welcome to YWS! I noticed this post on the front page and thought I would stop in to add a few comments before I go to bed. ^____^ ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Time goes by
Hey, Nimphal. I'm sorry it's taken so long for me to get to your review. Hopefully you're still open to some feedback. I'll do what I can! : D I. ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: The End of Time Chapter One
Hey, Bickazer. I'm so very sorry about how long it's taken me to get to this to review it, but hopefully you can still use some feedback. If you want ...
Jul 14, 2009 -
Re: Shoulda Been Simple: Chapter One
Hey there! Hannah, here as requested. ^___^ I. Little Things The heart-stopping oddity of this situation was that she was talking to my parents in the living room when I ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: No one...
Hey there! ^_^ My name's Hannah! Alright, let's get right down to business. There are two main ways that a repetitive poem like this can end: either the message stays ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: 1:00
Hey, Jester! Saw this on the front page and thought I'd pop in. I'm Hannah, by the way. ^_^ The moon’s soft glow mingled with the blinding gleam of my ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Pink Toes in Green Grass
Hey there, Alyssa! I saw this on the front page and I thought I'd drop in. ^_^ Hopefully I can be of some assistance. I'm Hannah, by the way. =] ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: Here where he will meet me
Hey there. =] I'm Hannah~ I caught this on the front page and it interested me, but after reading through it, I can't help but feel a little let down. ...
Jun 28, 2009 -
Re: .
Hey, Rosey. I don't remember if I've ever critiqued any of your work before, but even if I have, I'm here now. ^_^ Let's see what I can do for ...
Jun 28, 2009
