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Re: I Love My Dirt; My Dirt Loves Me
What a great story, I actually was looking for another one of your works but I found this instead . It was very sad how the child has a rough ...
Jul 29, 2008 -
Re: Murder & Investigation #2 - Discovery of the Murder
Well again you gave us all a great piece that I enjoyed reading. I am more of an amateur writer but I know what good is. There weren't many errors ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: Love and Murder in Mitadake Chapter 4
Another great chapter, things are really getting intense!(And you also helped me out in Mitadake High on BYOND by letting me know how to get to the security room) I'm ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: Love and Murder in Mitadake Chapter 3
Great chapter! Just two grammar errors. I awoke in the hallway. I was sitting towards the wall and Suki, well, Suki was standing in front of me, with an ax ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Love and Murder in Mitadake Chapter 2
What a great chapter! I enjoyed it alot! :D I couldn't find any problems (I never do) you also cut down on the interruptions but there was something that was ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: Love and Murder in Mitadake Chapter 1
Great story (chapter). I am a big fan of Mitadake High on BYOND and It got me thinking of writing a story Death Note, but back to the story. It ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Murder & Investigation #1 - Before the Murder
Great job! Two thumbs up. I only could read the revised version because I recently joined but from previous reviews the revision was great. I love how realistic the reactions ...
Jul 8, 2008