Hananah8

Wow. That ending. Just... Wow. Yeah, beware the forest. I also liked the reference. As for the writing itself, I may be tired, but this guy kind of grew on ...

Thanks for the input! I do tend to go a little bit crazy when it comes to commas. Character wise, I'm just thinking of how I would go about getting ...

Reading this made me smile. I'm not a poet, myself, but this was a pleasure to read. I really love your writing style! I really wish I could find some ...