Hallie

I don't usually enjoy rhyming poetry, sometimes I find it gets a little too childlike. But that's just my opinion and to be honest, it works in your poem. I ...

Imagery is beautiful, rhythm really works (although I think you may have lost it in the last couple of stanzas) and all in all a lovely piece to read. I ...

I agree with most of the others, while I liked this poem, I didn't like it at the same time. It does flow smoothly and has a vivid attention to ...

Love the imagery, love the story and love the entire piece. I had to read it a couple of times, just to make sure I didn't miss anything out. I'm ...