HalfbloodFangirl

Wow. This is a really powerful poem. This is really true. That's all people do to help people with mental health problems. They just give them pills and send them ...

Hey Dest! You did a fabulous job on this! I read the first part and completely fell in love with your style of writing! It's so professional but it's not ...

Hello, Tortwag! I'm HalfbloodFangirl and I have a review. I'm sorry you had to wait so long! Wording "The mother’s gaze froze for a split-second, as her question had only ...

Hi, Moalex! I have another review for you! Very little criticism this time, so it's short and sweet! Hope this helps! Wording "As one who pushed her body to the ...

Hey Moalex, I'm HalfbloodFangirl and I have just a little bit of criticism for you. Firs thing's first, I really like this series/story even though I've only read this chapter. ...

Hey marms, I'm back! Again, I have very little criticism. I'll keep it short and sweet. Simple Errors Head Teacher is a title. Capitalize both "head" and "teacher". The sentence ...

Hi marms, I'm HalfbloodFangirl and I have a review for you! Now first off, your style is very unique. I love reviewing because I get so see other's styles and ...

Hey scribbleinks, I'm HalfbloodFangirl here with a friendly review. First, I have no clue what's going on because I've only read this chapter. I'll only be pointing out basic and ...

First thing's first. Who's speaking in the beginning? That's very important. Also, why did you put three names on one line? "The brown brunette" didn't make any sense to me ...

I'm HalfbloodFangirl, here with a little criticism. I'll have to do this a chapter at a time. 1) Overall Overall, I think this is fantastic! Wording "There’s simply too many ...

I'm HalfbloodFangirl, here with a review for you! General Great job! Not much of a futuristic fan but good coming from someone who does not particularly enjoy this genre. Punctuation ...

I love this! This is something I would see on the shelf at a library, pick up, and read it in one sitting! Mathieu kinda seems desperate in the beginning, ...