Hailey_Ann

Hello!! Mmmmh, okay, I'm not particularly sure about what I thought of this poem. It seemed direct and I generally like that In a poem, but maybe It needed more?? ...

Hello! Okayyy, overall, a good poem. It flows, but yes, just kind of hits a dead end which is not such a good thing. Where you running out of stuff ...

WOW.... I really enjoyed this poem. The rhymes seemed to go very well together and the emotion was very direct. But yet, still I'm not completely sure of what the ...