Hadj

I always like one of my stanzas (usually last or penultimate) to have a different rhythm :P As for the title, i wouldn't name it "Gay" because the poem isn't ...

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Thanks for the review, and I agree, there are alot of poems like this on here. But this one kind of came to me and I simply had to publish ...

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Thank you so much for the review and follow!

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Nice story, and I'm sorry for you and your friend. "Fish" what a name! xD

The poem is meant to be confusion. But if you want to know what happened, I might as well state it clear. This poem is about children going into the ...

Oh, ok :)

I'm glad you like it! Also, welcome to YWS!

Hey there. Thanks for the review and the praise. Yes, it is supposed to be "are", and none of the characters in this poem literally died. Try reading it again, ...

Hey nice review, and thanks for the praise :)

Thanks so much! Also, Welcome to YWS and let me know if you need anything :)

Thanks so much for the reviews and the follow! I love to see appreciation for my work!

I'm glad you like it, and thanks for the follow! I admit, "t'was" is a little out of place, but I included it rather than "it was" to keep the ...