Hadj

Basically, you just recopied your old review and added a few seconds. This is considered cheating, especially during a review day (i hate to call my teammate out on it). ...

Thanks! Yes, this poem does talk about loneliness, but there are some more themes in there too. Anyways awesome review, and thanks for the like! (btw, why not wait 22 ...

Another thing I meant to say. Margaret finally spoke, her teeth clashing together as she sputtered. %u201CI can%u2019t do this anymore!%u201D Tears were already trying to leak, but I knew ...

Thanks!

Thanks so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Welcome to YWS! (a bit late)

sorry, its actually: 4 syllables 3 syllables 4 syllables 4 syllables

The lack of punctuation was intentional ;) As for the first stanza, I think it flows just fine in my head 3 syllables 2 syllables 4 syllables 4 syllables The ...

Thanks for the review and welcome to YWS! Let me know if you need anything!

Thanks so much!

Thanks for the review! My original idea was to end with the narrator in italics, but the end as it was seemed so perfect, I didn't want to change it!

According to information gathered from your personal biography, we refuse to believe that the creator of this document was one in the same with the feline author. We persist to ...

"But I don't remember the other ducks killing the ugly one." Reread the first stanza ;) Anyways, thanks for the like and review!

Thanks for the review, but try not to quote the entire poem!

Thanks for the review! I'm glad you liked it!

I wouldn't consider the "And"s to be a mistake I always capitalize the first letter of each stanza, its simply a matter of preference. I don't wouldn't use the word ...