Hadj

Thanks for the review and welcome to YWS!

Thanks for the review and welcome to YWS!

I almost always have one longer line in the third or fourth stanza. People usually complain, but I promise if you read it the way it played in my head, ...

I don't have time to review right now. I'm going to be honest, I read some of your other work and I didn't like it, but this was very good. ...

Yes I did

I understand that's the point of your poem, is that the dragon may have a reason behind its actions. I just think that "a heart like a warm smile" is ...

Hey! Thanks for the follow! I would reccomend not using that stamp at all. To me, using stamps is almost like cheating, and it also doesn't look that good. I ...

Two more things I forgot to mention: 1) if you want people to listen to you (and go against their strong beliefs) use some more textual evidence and stop generalizing. ...

I usually agree, but If I read something open-mindedly and still disagree with everything they say, I have the right to state what I think don't I?

If you are going to write a play on words, don't disguise it as something else, and try making an attempt to make it humerus. If you don't actually agree ...

You'll notice that the first line of every verse is 4 syllables, i don't know why you only critisized that in the second verse, and I promise you by the ...

Yes (sort of) (sort of)

I'm glad you liked it. Also, I'm glad you noticed "right", I put that in there to see whether anyone who reviewed it would actually read the author's note :P ...

Also, about the no more death, its even more ironic because "No More Death" is a poem about death :P

Everyone thinks its a she the man she hated But whatever Also the rhyme scheme is pretty consistant: AAB, AAB, CCB, CCB, DDE, FB (just that the last two stanzas ...