HJYoung

Ty for the review man! And ty for the compliment lol

lol ty man

ty!

You see the way i did 'over there', 'under there', and 'in there'? That was purposeful-and I thought it was kinda smart when i was 11 LOL.

Woah the praise... ty for the review, im flattered that you think so. :D

ty for the review

ty

There we go

What the: Its

Please remember I am 13 and this is my first serious literary attempt,p!

Ty!

I meant it%u2019s is the correct word form

And it%u2019s is correct

You think its really that good? Should i do something with the story when im done it?

Uh, and the thing is... this is my first ever writing piece so i may have some issues here and there.