HJYoung

yes, the poem, i shall fix it in a bit.

Also, I did say that Shawn was a intern from the Association(check appendix), and Lawrence is a astrophysicist with a PhD, and Robert is the head of the association. Lawrence ...

Haha, to answer all your questions: I will break it up as soon as i have time for reviews, and ty for the grammar, ill fix it. Sol is unique ...

To summarize, it depends on your frame of reference, just like in relativity.

Hm that isnt my point, my point in my poem is that dark and light are different for every person. To one, a bright light, to another, a all-consuming darkness. ...

One thing, could you elaborate on the poem thing?

Yah my goal is 20,000 words, so far i have 5000. Thanks for for the review though! :D

I like the rhyme in the first two lines, "The wind; be it slow or fast Make us forget our past" I like the use of a variety of metaphors, ...

Ok, how many reviews do i need to get the 200 required points?

Interesting!

To summarize: life is better tasty and varied, rather than bland and boring. I like it!

I will post a new chapter every week.

Feedback of all sorts is greatly appreciated! When i get to dialogue, please don't bully me, I am absolutely terrible at dialogue, and desperately need tips on how to do ...