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Gwenevire

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Let It Bleed: (possibly the new beginning)

    Saint: Thank you so much, I will make the corrections right away. If you need anything reviewed just PM me and I will get around to it (some day :p) ...

    Tue Feb 26, 2008 9:42 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter Three

    Thanks ning, I know... Its really full of errors but I don't care right now. :P Hard to explain. I know Fayth was right but he was very rude and ...

    Wed Feb 13, 2008 1:31 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter Three

    I guess you are right, but he was a bit rude at the end :( I asked that people help me pull out important things, that make the story unique ...

    Tue Feb 12, 2008 9:47 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter Three

    Okay Fayth. I find you reviews very harsh and rude. My character is not a jerk off. Maybe Gwen thinks she is in a dream. People aren't completely oblivious to ...

    Tue Feb 12, 2008 1:53 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter One

    Thanks you three! I will do my corrections tomorrow, I am very sleepy now. Just did a 9 page review, *yawns* Thanks! Gwen

    Fri Feb 08, 2008 1:35 am
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: In The Hand Of The Godess

    Beats me... I always thought George was older XD Just goes to show how out of it I am! I only own the second book *tear* I will get the ...

    Thu Feb 07, 2008 5:25 am
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: In The Hand Of The Godess

    Totally! It kinda freaks me out that she is 16 and he is like 30 or something and they are like married. Yah remember we where talking about the books ...

    Thu Feb 07, 2008 5:13 am
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: In The Hand Of The Godess

    Oh yes! Now I remember :D Thanks Valor! You rock! But I know that she has a kid with George now... But I kinda like him. He's cool =]

    Thu Feb 07, 2008 5:07 am
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: In The Hand Of The Godess

    Cool. Thanks :D Did he find out in the first book? I am sorry I read the first one like 2 years ago XD

    Thu Feb 07, 2008 4:56 am
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Trickster's Choice/Trickster's Queen

    Thanks you two! Well I am off to read! *jumps around happily* yay! -Gwen

    Wed Feb 06, 2008 3:06 am
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Trickster's Choice/Trickster's Queen

    Thanks :) But you have read Tricksters Queen right? Well do you think if I read it now before reading the first one will it make any sense? Ah what ...

    Wed Feb 06, 2008 2:37 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter One

    Well there is a twisting plot that will explane why here eyes are oak brown now and icy blue later. Same with her hair... Did I mention it is black ...

    Wed Feb 06, 2008 1:23 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Let It Bleed: Chapter One

    Thanks for the crit :) You really like it? Aw thank you! What part of my story inspired you to do it in 1800's? Love ya back, Genevieve xox

    Wed Feb 06, 2008 1:02 am
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: 6/6

    Love it! Super good. Its so well done I can't say anything but.... Keep writing and add more description! Good work!

    Wed Jan 30, 2008 12:45 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Moonlight Seagull: Chaper Five No no romeo

    Thanks. I am going to take out this chapter and re write it. It was rushed and I think I had had a bad day... If you catch my drift! ...

    Sun Jan 27, 2008 1:41 am


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
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