Gummy

Writing palindrome poems is so fun! I appreciate you taking the time to review this piece! And thanks for pointing that line out, I'll take your points in consideration. c:

Thank you for your thoughts~ I knew someone was going to comment on something remotely related to Willy Wonka eventually XD In all seriousness, though, thanks for your kind words ...

Thank you for your thoughts~ I was originally planning on writing out the numbers as words, but "911" is a phone number, and I didn't want to make the allusion ...

Thanks for your thoughts~ I speed-wrote this poem, you see, and it's one of, if not the first of its kind coming from my hand. It was more of a ...

Thanks for taking the time to review! This was a very "on-the-fly" poem, you see, and I tend to make these short so as not to overstretch my inspiration and ...

Thanks so much for taking your time to review~ Yeah, I was kind of worried about those lines from square one, but eventually decided to go with what my gut ...

I really liked the use of onomatopoeias in this poem, and I found the break in the poem intriguing. This is the ending, huh? The poem seems to turn itself ...

Thanks! I made this poem a few years, back when I was a firm believer in "form is everything" when it came to concrete poetry. (I still am, actually, but ...

Thanks for the review! I tried to keep the rhymes as simple as possible to match the innocence and simplicity the poem is supposed to express. P.S. As you can ...

Thanks to both for your honest reviews~ I'll take your advice into consideration and hopefully come back with an even better work very soon (and in time for Review Day ...