GryphonFledgling

Had it just been my sister leaving, I could have rationalized that she was the only one in the family going to the palace. Maybe I'm just being incredibly slow ...

Wow. All that stuff we're finding out about Lars is pretty heavy. I really wouldn't have suspected any of this really from Solea's diary. Speaking of which, I feel almost ...

Erm... I'm with Twit. This is beautiful. It really is. The language drew me in, I was hooked on this premise, but I didn't really understand it. It might just ...

Well, it took far too long, but here I am! Am I allowed to get a little nitpicky? I'mma be a little nitpicky, or else this review will be nothing ...

Mmm, I liked seeing the White Swans in action here. I get a very distinct sense of them thinking they are all that is holy and good, but when you ...

Whew. Reviewing finally. So... a lot was explained here. And a lot more questions raised. Like, a lot. But I'm willing to roll with them for now and see what ...

Everyone else blamed me for Danielle’s suicide. Wait, I thought Danielle was murdered. Strangled. Was there contrary evidence? Was it made to look like she committed suicide? I was a ...

Ooh, I liked this. The voice was especially what hooked me. So snarky, so matter-of-fact, even when dealing with something like her death. It was quirky and fun and I ...

Yes. Yesyesyesyes. So much better. I loved the continuation of the musings on his late master and their exploits together, and the cultural stuff on the Thitherians was awesome. Here's ...

Hey-oh! At this point he discarded his son's body How? Just dumped him on the floor? Why was he carrying it around just to throw it aside? This seemed a ...

The one person who felt familiar to me was out of my reach, and I didn't even know why. Erm, what about Dean? Isn't he familiar and there for Duncan? ...

Hoookay, this is my favorite chapter by far. So much conversation and character development! *boogies* If you ask me, love is more important than both. My idea of paradise is ...

Oooh, dealing with the spirit for the cure was interesting. My question is, now that they have faced the spirit, who the tribal folks really seem to revere if not ...

Mmm, dramatic. Spacing was a little wonky here again. Wanna check on it? I had fallen for Nico. Why? She talks about knowing him for the past few days and ...

Oh, so much better. We still get the sort of creepy inspector vibe, wondering what the heck is going on in this weird situation, but it moves along at a ...