GryphonFledgling

Wow, I liked this a lot more than I thought I would. Despite your disclaimer at the top and my general lack of love for the "cutter" stories, I clicked ...

I must say that I disagree with you, Clo, but I can see where you are coming from. When I first read "Artemis Fowl", the only thing that kept me ...

Yup, I agree with Clo also. This is great and has an interesting quality, but it is all telling rather than showing. Plus, some stuff gets skimmed over so fast ...

Ah, Kylan, Kylan... You should write more things without gore and such... You are really good at it! I was a little confused (though you did warn me): does he ...

*blinks* That last sentence was... odd. It didn't really fit with the rest of the story, to suddenly have a talking hammer. Though, since it did "take his wits", it ...

Hello, hello... To start off, YWS has a policy of leaving 2 reviews on other people's works before posting 1 of your own. That was everyone has a chanced to ...

Very nice. I love how there is so much emotion in the chapter, only to boil down to a matter of fact message. It's pretty awesome seeing how much there ...

*blinks* This was so freaky and all the while, I was wondering how this one guy knew everything in such great detail (like, about the note and the fact that ...

I really love the matter-of-fact beginning, the way he breaks in, his thoughts about it and the way he apologizes to the grave. For some reason, that just reached out ...

Strange that this has been around so long and I have seen it around, but never bothered to read it. Then, I do click on it and find it sadly ...

Ah! Big paragraphs! *cowers* Yes, to repeat the mantra of everyone else, the paragraphs are just far too large here. Break them up and they'd be much more readable. As ...

I loved this. I was in the crowd of "a penny?" but, having finished it, I am in awe. Very, very nice. My only critique is not actually of the ...

Hello, hello... Thought I'd drop by and review. Bittersweet did a bunch of nitpicky things, so I won't go there. This was really interesting and eerie. I was left wanting ...

This piece just killed me. It was utterly amazing and just rent my heart. The ending sentence devastated me, but at the same time, it confused me. You mention earlier ...

Nope, still confused. But this was beautiful. Still a bit purple prose-y, but amazing. As white as a woman's thighs. So... There aren't any black women in this new world? ...