GryphonFledgling

Allo allo. I am Gryph, and I shall be your reviewer this evening! Aden lay sleeping at a large oak desk, light streaming in through curtains set dust motes dancing ...

Hello hello~! Well, this was a wild ride. Let's start at the top and work our way down, shall we? So, I understand that this written from the character's point ...

Ah, chapter two. So there's quite a bit of point of view shifting in this. First we're with Grace, then Dempsey, then vice versa again and again. It's a little ...

Okay, so I'm intrigued. I like the idea of the story starting after some issues, picking up the pieces as it were. The relationships between the characters seem interesting and ...

Hello hello! I'm Gryph and I'll be your reviewer today. This looks like it's shaping up to be a dark, dramatic romance? Wonderful. Let's dig in. First off, breaking up ...

Back again, hello. This chapter was... odd. Like, I felt very confused and loose the entire time, as if I couldn't really grab onto anything. I think it was the ...

Pssst. Hello darling, remember me? I realize I'm very late to the game, but I want to read your new chapter and I can't do that without reading what came ...

fictional circle in the air. I get what you're going for here, but 'fictional' just seems an odd word choice. 'Imaginary' instead, maybe? I nicknamed it DG by the way. ...

this enthusiastic story Why the bolding here? a clevergirl clever girl with nothing but the clothes on her back. Where was his destination? She had not the slightest idea. Why ...

Hello hello! The song brought back memories from when I was younger and my father would sit beside me on the bench where Alec was sitting, watching me intently with ...

Hello hello! Those were the information gathered in the thoughts of a golden eagle. This confused me a bit. How is this information "gathered"? Are they the thoughts of the ...

Hey-oh! All righty then, we'll start at the beginning, shall we? You start with Micah waking up. Why? I mean, a lot of stories begin with their characters waking up. ...

Hey hi! Welcome to YWS! I'm GryphonFledgling, and I'll be your reviewer today. First off, is your main character a boy or a girl? I honestly couldn't tell, because I'm ...

Totes jumping right in. Because I love you like that. I’d given Justine the evening off, so I had to prepare the wash water myself. I was too tired to ...

Heyyup! GryphonFledgling in the reviewing house! So, first off, just wanted to say that your title intrigued me. It was what make me initially click out of curiosity. I look ...