GrinningMan

A longer poem that I don't normally read, yet satisfying to do so. I like the message behind your piece and I'd like to see more from you later on, ...

Oh my... All the mistakes...

Well, interesting. I like the premise of this story... Where it's going I should say. It's done pretty well, I actually make a connection with the character. Not only that ...

You're welcome.

I very much appreciate your input! Honestly I thought about giving up on this series entirely because no one seemed to like it very much, but it seems I was ...

Again, it's the first chapter in the Ruby Files, it will have blips here and there, because I'm only in high school. Yet, I can type better than... The other... ...