Griffinkeeper

Nope, she. It must have been a sight to see me the girl every one said was too girly to camp, going camping alone.

I thought it was rather funny. By the way "Kook" doesn't have a C in it. Unless you meant that the liberal in question was a Cook, in which case ...

Not a computer necessarily, a lot was human done. Unless the original authors used a computer.

Oh yeah! I remember this! This the one I got excommunicated for!

You're right Snoink. Serves me right for writing at 12:00 in the morning. Guess that means I have to do the story first. Breakfast for me!

I've edited the post according to your recommendations Firestarter.

I think this doesn't count as a prologue. Sorry. If you want to use this type of prologue, fine. Don't say I didn't warn you though.

Here is what it comes down to. You know how it didn't fit in chapter one? It sure as heck doesn't fit here. You are using the prologue like you ...

Um... very dark? I'll never be able to post a good critique for poetry.

If they're done in your head, then what is preventing you from explaining them on paper? Maybe Rei told you were she was having problems? You could keep the prologue, ...

Well done. I do believe that is what people call a compliment, you are quite welcome. Now, when will I decide to post something? More importantly, how will it be ...

This is simply too blocky as far as text is concerned. It needs too have two lines between each paragraph before I can read it. This is an example: Blah. ...

I don't thing the weapons are really appropriate either. Werewolves can only be killed by shooting them through the heart with a silver bullet. A katana or a whip are ...

Thanks for the vote of confidence. Also, sure doesn't have an h in it. Also, it seems like you have a run-on sentence, split it up. Just cause you're not ...

I think it is very fitting. Then again, I know Penelope...