Griffinkeeper

Yes, this is a joke. I wonder if this would count as YWS Fan-fiction?

Weird. Very weird. And random. Grammatically speaking this is excellent, a great piece of writing. But it's strange, it opens with a sadistic man taking pleasure in someone else's pain ...

Trust me DQ, everything in this story is highly exaggerated or outright made up. Your character is no exception. Were this to be completely realistic, the story would be much ...

When will you English folks convert to American? Anyways, I enjoyed the humorous nature of it, it was a lot of fun to read.

(Jigsaw, I was out of ideas. Unless you want me to put them on swivel prayer mats... Didn't think so.) The Miata had only parked when the bus rammed it. ...

I edited it so that it wouldn't skew the main page so much. I just got rid of some of the spaces between "Sly Flame", "A Play in One Act", ...

It didn't take long for the Miata to figure out it was being followed. A reckless bus isn't covert by any means, especially on city streets. Silent Aviator was in ...

I didn't use dialogue, mostly because it didn't quite fit in my plans. The focus was on the boy, who was trying to be found. No dialogue there. Admittedly, I ...

Insert paragraphs to make it easier to read. Leave space between the lines of dialogue and between paragraphs. Really, I don't get how you expect anyone to sit down and ...

Could we call you undecided Torpid? Really, what did you like, what didn't you like. More than likely, Snoink wants help on the writing aspect, not so much your reaction ...

The beginning is a little confusing. Maybe something a little more chatty? I love how you tied in the joke in the story with the ending. It looks like a ...

*Begins eating cookies at a frantic rate, before stopping, horrified.* Got Milk?

I can not see how you can think that we are misinterpreting the story, especially after Snoink took it apart practically by sentence. Writing isn't about making puzzles. It's about ...

Jigsaw, you really need to change your avvie, it's confusing blob. blob, I'm having difficulty understanding your writing. It seems you made an entire sentence into the size of a ...

Silent Aviator faced every Marine's worst nightmare: having two terrorist organizations in the same place and not having a weapon. It now became painfully clear to Silent Aviator that he ...