Griffinkeeper

Try asking people in the fiction discussion forum or do a google search.

In the history of absurd plot twists, skateboarding with Jack Bauer and a few YWS members while being chased by terrorists and a homicidal robot from the future would probably ...

Grif walked out of the hospital and looked out. The hospital felt so stifling, getting out in the open again was a relief. "GRIF!" Areida said running towards him. "Hi ...

Technically, it's still clean because I haven't described anything. But the subject matter has gotten a little racy. More action!

I did make him pretty creepy didn't I? Stay tuned.

Grif stood in the hospital. Smaur had passed out due to low blood levels. Incandescence had used a slightly more complex word for it, but he was the closest thing ...

I bumped it up to PG-13 because it deals with suicide.

I got rid of the duplicate, make sure to do two critiques per submission.

Cool it down people. Squallz, EK was giving you an honest critique. All critiques should be taken with a grain of salt.

Where's the story?

When the heavy language (the F word) and sexual content is involved, then it is rated R, not PG-13.

This poem was plaguerized off . Plaguerism earns you a banning.

Let's keep it cool guys.

First, this needs a PG-13 rating. Second, this doesn't look like it belongs in Fantasy Fiction, it seems more like a sci-fi.

This belongs in the poetry department. *Moved to Other Poetry*