GreenTulip

1. The "Hunters" is based off the tv show- "Supernatural". 2. This chapter is based off of when they were younger, so of course they will be child aged. 3. ...

Thank you.

Thank you. I will work on things like that.

This is a chapter..and there is no simple way to start a kidnapping that is the reason. Have you read the first two chapters before this?

Okay-----there will be some added words because I typed this out in a rush and was looking off of my phone's screen. So please do not tell me what shouldn't ...

Chapter 3 is up. :)

Thank you for the review. I have felt like no one has read this yet. And I have a single thing to say: I am a Girl, not a boy. ...

if you found something with the chapter, it's been edited a little bit

tenses have been edited, but that's all I can do for now.

edited a little bit for right now.

Thank you. And I wrote this at different times so that will explain the changes in tense. I will be sure to work on that when I am feeling a ...

The ending is abrubt because she changes subject in the next paragraph and that is xplaining how she met Sam and other stuff so ya.

The fact hat his father was just to explain the loss, and a pair is two vampires. He didn't think that it would be that dangerous. His friends went to ...

Yay, learning new things everyday. :)

I managed to do it. :) I feel happy. "The clay that you stand on holds more than nutrients. It holds our history, our failings and our victories. It holds ...