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Re: all dressed up and no where to go (volume one).
Don't write in present tense unless you are very aware of the cinematic effects it creates, and know how to take advantage of it, and even then only do it ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 1: We are who we are.
It's not a bad intro. Catchy and to the point, and I admire the way you raised points in the poem. Keep hacking at it if you haven't finished it ...
Feb 1, 2014 -
Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. CHAPTER-3
The story could be interesting. You use adverbs a little bit too much. Try visualizing your story as scenes as you write, because that might help you with making the ...
Sep 3, 2013