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  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: To Be Watching

    lol. nice

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Davey

    I'm sorry. I couldn't get through this whole short story. Your dialogue is quoted wrong. For example instead of '(dialogue)' It's supposed to be "(dialogue)". When a new character speaks, ...

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: To Be Watching

    haha lol. What does your avatar say?

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: To Be Watching

    What's a full-stop?

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: To Be Watching

    Coolio. Thank you :)

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Short Story » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: To Be Watching

    Lol I don't. I promise. I just happen to be a good, experienced writer. Haha I am not a stalker, nor am I a "stalkee". I noticed someone posted a ...

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Run away, Ray

    I like this poem. I wish you would have had better formatting structure. Also, you try to rhyme, and when you do this the rhythm is off. I love the ...

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ask Me Why

    Thanks guys. Honestly, I used facts and statistics to back this up. This is an emotionally based essay, but honestly... you went overboard. You completely took lines out of my ...

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ask Me Why

    Thanks :) I really appreciate it. I repeated "same sex marriage". Like I said, you were free to interpret this however you chose. No judging :)

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ask Me Why

    That is a completely different issue altogether.

    Oct 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ask Me Why

    Thanks

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ask Me Why

    Okay good. Lol not that you disagree with it but that it isn't badly written

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ask Me Why

    Why have you not enjoyed it? Was it not well written or did you not agree with it? Or do you just not like non-fiction? I'm sorry to dissapoint you.

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ask Me Why

    Lol. Sorry. I have very broad beliefs for a Christian. Is this the only thing that confuses you? I just kinda wanted to put my opinion "out there".

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ask Me Why

    lol. Are you angry with me for being Christian and believing in this?

    Oct 21, 2013


I have been impressed with the urgency of doing. Knowing is not enough; we must apply. Being willing is not enough; we must do.
— Leonardo da Vinci