Gravity

Thank you so much :)

Yeah, no prob. Don't think of it as a slap, more of a poke. :)

Yeah, see. I had no idea about any of this. I just ask that you be more clear with that.

Thank you. And Carrie is not right in the head. lol. She's nuts!

Thank you so much for seeing these details. Dani is technically bulimic, you'll see this in Chapter 1 Part 2. The thing is, she kinda goes on a cycle. She ...

Thanks. I'm glad it had a good impact on you. I actually already have Chapter 1 Part 2/2 written, but I think I'm going to wait until tomorrow to post ...

Yes! that will definitely come later. Thanks for the review. I'm doing a lot of editing right now, someone PMed me and told me this was originally too long so ...

Well, I've done over 40 reviews just like this and no one seems to have an issue with it. I'll admit I can be sarcastic, but as far as the ...

He didn't. He carved him up and dropped him back in.

Thanks :)

Carrie was insane, that was the point. As for the plot holes, there are supposed to be plot holes because it's a random story. In the end, Carrie's brother says ...

Hey, sorry. You commented on this a long time ago and I didn't reply. It is symbolism for a boy. It's a complete metaphor. Thank you :)

Lol. The forest isn't really a forest. This was written about a boy. The forest is within The Beast, it's where he hides from everybody. It's a symbol for a ...

Again, I'm sorry. I know I can be harsh.

lol thanks.