Gravity

I'm not offended, just a little upset, but I'm a big girl, so I can handle it. My advice to you would be to spend a little more than fifteen ...

SIBUNA And Ali is a girl, not a dude.

8 letters, 3 words, 1 meaning. I love you. Get it?

thanks so much, I'm working on Chapter 1 right now.

Thanks Malachi, you are awesome :)

I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. I never write about things I don't understand, I always have more success in writing what I know. Thank you for the review, it ...

Totes. Lulu, you rock

Yeah I definitely see what you're saying. I didn't want to add another stanza because I didn't want to make the poem tedious to read. I'll fix the "snugly" error ...

Yeah... you completely got this wrong. "Legs turned out" is correct because this is about ballet. One of the techniques in ballet is about keeping the legs and feet turned ...

Yeah I did. I understand you weren't actually trying to be disrespectful. I guess I'm just a prude and I just simply don't like a woman's body to be described ...

Sorry, I'm not a fan of rap. I dislike the way that most rap disrespects women, and I just don't like it when women's bodies are objectified. It seems like ...

Thanks for the review. In the "I love you." He says. The "H" should be capitalized because the first letter after a quotation mark has to be capitalized. I'm glad ...

well good. I wish dream Luke was like my "Luke" in real life. Sadly, Caroline's reality is much like my own. I'm glad your parents taught you how to treat ...

Lulu, I could never be tired of your reviews! You always have great things to say, and I'm glad you like my work. I saw in one of your previous ...

Thanks for the review. You aren't being creepy by saying you are like Luke. I was wondering about the similarities, what do you see in yourself that is like Luke?