Gravity

Wow, the description in this was really good. The first paragraph is really the main thing that needs fixing. The first line is dialogue and you're missing the first quotation ...

This was beautiful, disturbing, but beautiful. You were correct in saying that this is very repetitive. When the older sister writes to the younger she writes "my darling younger sister". ...

I love this. I could really relate to it and I only have one nitpick. First I'm going to tell you what I liked. I liked how this poem is ...

this is a beautiful poem. I really loved how surreal it was and it was just gorgeous. I always have a few nitpicks, however. So here goes nothing. their intervals ...

This is really good. I do have a few nitpicks, of course. But only a few. That Monday morning the topic of discussion was the way his heart had broken. ...

I agree that Disney sucks. I understand that being gay is who you are, and that's great. But homosexuality is so controversial right now. It isn't the fault of Disney. ...

I enjoyed this poem. I really only have a few negative things to say about it, most of them are good. First, I like the imagery that you use in ...

I loved the idea. I thought it was creative and wonderful all at the same time. However, I feel this idea could've been well executed. I think you did something ...

I agree with this to a point. I think that at some points you go off topic. First you talk about labels, then you go into things about your friend ...

Oh my gosh, YES. YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES! I LOVE YOUR LAST STATEMENT I LOVE THIS ESSAY I LOVE YOU! (Just kidding) but seriously. This ...

I really hate to rain on your parade. I just didn't love this as much as everybody else did. That's normal for me, I tend to like the pieces that ...

Okay Kev, Happy Review Day! I thought this was good, but it isn't flawless. I like the plot you have here. Drunken man going after his wife. He's convinced that ...

Hey Lucy! I just wanted to say that I have not read the rest of your wonderful novel, but I really liked this chapter. First, I think it's interesting that ...

I like the way this was written, there were just a few flaws in your structure that were kinda odd as well as some things that don't make sense. 1. ...

Kate! Haha. I remember that you did a review for me at one point. My french poem, la vie est belle. So I decided to check this out. I love ...