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Re: on writing
I absolutely love this, I think it sums up the writing process very nicely. The structure of the poem also reminds me of how I feel when I'm having a ...
Aug 26, 2012 -
Re: Lipstick Stains
I have almost nothing but praise for this. The imagery was perfect, especially the contrast between pale lips and lipstick. My favorite part is the third stanza, the imagery in ...
Aug 26, 2012 -
Re: This is War
I certainly don't agree with most of this poem's political message, especially (if my interpretation is correct) the first stanza, but, beyond that, this actually isn't bad. The second stanza ...
Aug 26, 2012 -
Re: Coffee Stains
To be honest, about two paragraphs into reading this story, I had to go back and make sure that I wasn't the author. I was pretty much living this story ...
Aug 26, 2012 -
Re: the way you hate
The honesty of the poem really grabs me from the first line, and it stays through to the last. I like the way you describe the subject's laughter. The one ...
Aug 25, 2012 -
Re: Confessions of a Compulsive Liar
I actually found myself identifying with this almost immediately. This is very raw, but doesn't have the feeling of trying too hard, like most of the things like it. The ...
Aug 15, 2012
