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Granger2291

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: on writing

    I absolutely love this, I think it sums up the writing process very nicely. The structure of the poem also reminds me of how I feel when I'm having a ...

    Aug 26, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Lipstick Stains

    I have almost nothing but praise for this. The imagery was perfect, especially the contrast between pale lips and lipstick. My favorite part is the third stanza, the imagery in ...

    Aug 26, 2012
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: This is War

    I certainly don't agree with most of this poem's political message, especially (if my interpretation is correct) the first stanza, but, beyond that, this actually isn't bad. The second stanza ...

    Aug 26, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, Other Re: Coffee Stains

    To be honest, about two paragraphs into reading this story, I had to go back and make sure that I wasn't the author. I was pretty much living this story ...

    Aug 26, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: the way you hate

    The honesty of the poem really grabs me from the first line, and it stays through to the last. I like the way you describe the subject's laughter. The one ...

    Aug 25, 2012
  • Other » General, General Re: Confessions of a Compulsive Liar

    I actually found myself identifying with this almost immediately. This is very raw, but doesn't have the feeling of trying too hard, like most of the things like it. The ...

    Aug 15, 2012


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