GrandmaMuffin

The last sentence made me laugh XD 'cus the whole time I thought you were talking about something totally different! In English we are reading Anne Frank and I thought ...

I luv it! 'Cus it describes me perfectly! People at school are all like,"Why don't you talk?" It gets SOOOOOO annoying! I can't really critique it because poems aren't my ...

Hia :) I agree with the rest before me. Main things: The light in the cave. Her being able to see after it left. It was a little confusing. Why ...

You're very odd. I've read most of your work, and I still don't understand your style :) I've read this piece four times. Maybe to try and find a secret ...

Love the poem because it's better than mine as all poems are! So saying that, I can't really help you improve. Just here to tell you that you should keep ...

NOW I'M ALL EXCITED! I wanna know who the lady is and why she was driving back and forth like that. Maybe she works with "Chris". Or she could have ...

So what happens next? :) Can't wait for the next chapter - GRANDMAMUFFIN ] -

I thought that was sensational! I couldn't have thought of something like that in a million years. I didn't find anything wrong with it so no nitpicks. So keep being ...

That was funny :D especially the food fight part. This needs another chapter. Unless you already made one. I didn't see anything wrong with it so no nitpicks. I'm not ...

Hello person. :) Lets get down to business. . . I thought that was awesome! I couldn't find anything wrong with it so no nitpicks. Yayaz :B

LUV IT

This story was like so awesome. The beginning almost made me cry :( but the ending made me happy :) I found a few spelling mistakes. NITPICKS: So he sat ...

Hey :) this was a good, short poem and was enjoyable. Now, I am not too great at grammar, nor have I ever written a poem I was proud of ...

This was really good :) a good thing about the story is you have many different emotions when you read it. curiosity-there's something in his pocket, what is it? why ...

Yes the writing was a little repetitive, but good word choice all the same :) The lyrics were nice. Feels like our hearts are under attack. Keep it safe and ...