Grace17

Hey, great knowledge of historical events! Just a few pointers about your opening, the man actually behind the Terror was Robespierre, the leader of the Jacobin Club, the most radical ...

Hey, I loved this, it had my heart pounding with anticipation, even though it was only a short piece. You set the scene beautifully; the gritty, desolated atmosphere surrounding poverty ...

Hello, This piece has a lot of raw emotion to it which came across vividly, well done, and you explored many elements of adolescence which is extremely challenging and traumatic. ...

Your descriptive language is fantastic! You paint such a vivid picture of the scene, its beautifully poetic, but you only set up the scene of the writing, there is no ...