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Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 1
***UPDATE Okay, I'm back from art class, so I'll consumate the review. “Don’t shoot too high comma my brother! Eventually shooting stars burn out.” “Well done comma my Soaring Yeasa’s! ...
Dec 13, 2007 -
Re: Jazz Hands
I thought the piece was really creative, and the premise was intriguing. It's something that I could see happening. You didn't need to describe anything; your dialogue was sufficient. I'd ...
Dec 11, 2007 -
Re: (Unnamed) Chapter 1- Part 1
Thank you for asking me all these questions, I'm sure it will help anyone else who gets confused. First, Aneris' home is filled with bird ornaments and she has 4 ...
Dec 5, 2007 -
Re: Night of the Living Pony: Part One
It's a cute story. I think some of it is kind of funny :) Keep it up, I'll be there for the next part.
Dec 5, 2007
