GoldenQuill

Hey! I'm Aushy, and I'll be reviewing your story today. Little nit-pick: I turn to look at my timer. “Great job sweetie! You were awesome!” She says, but I don’t ...

*pops in* 'Ello! I'd like to review your story. =} David had, against his better judgment, gone through the drive-through window to order his strawberry milkshake. There was something markedly ...

Hey there. I'm Aushy, and I'll be reviewing your poem today. I really enjoyed that. You certainly have a way with words. But certaintly you didn't post this up just ...

NITPICK! Look up from the blanket was the cutest little boy I had ever seen. Perhaps 'looking'? new, baby brother Why do we have a comma here? I'm on the ...

There were tons of grammar mistakes, but not that major and you'll probably catch them. There was one thing I didn't like how you explained: “Eggshells?” she repeated, as if ...

Hello hello hello! I'm Aushy, and I shall be critiquing your story today. Other than a few grammar probelms (which were so minor I'm not even going to call you ...

Let me tear apart this and fix all the grammar issuses I saw: I tossed the last head of lettuce into the plastic bowl next to me and hopped up ...

I read it over and over again, desperate to find at least one mistake; but I couldn't. Everything seemed perfect, flawless. And then the cliffhanger at the end! That was ...

I'm sorry; I unforunately didn't have time to read the second part, just the first. You had tons of grammar mistakes, but I kept on forgetting them as I read ...

Well. Pretty much everyone caught my mistakes. x[} But I did enjoy that. I liked the way you describe and the suspence and what-not. But what I don't understand is ...

Wow. That's really scary. Can I say I enjoyed a peice about someone with an awful disease? I liked how you worded everything, described how you felt. It really made ...

Hello there! I read through it, and other than a few grammar mistakes [like, you should of put a comma there, or should of put a question mark here, or ...

It was pretty good; but I couldn't finish reading it, because I kept on finding a few mistakes that bugged me. “Mom look I can take care of my self. ...

That was pretty good; I have to admit I didn't think it would be. Vehement Writer nearly got everything, but I have one thing to add: “Yes.” the boy answers ...

That was good. It's not really the kind of stories I read, but it had good description. You're an amazing writer. ^.^ What I didn't understand is this: Their fleet ...