GoldFlame

No problem!

Your reviews. O.O So ... good... The ellipsis-spaces issue has always kinda befuddled me because I keep hearing different things from different people. I searched it up a while ago ...

Thanks! I'll make those changes. :D The ending is a bit vague. I'm thinking of fluffing it up and just extending the overall piece (also an excuse to edit some ...

You're the best.

No problem! Haha, I'm more of a logical thinker than a writer.

Thanks! I'm flattered. :D Any time you need a review, don't hesitate to ask! I'll probably get it to you today or tomorrow.

I always have that problem with your work, seriously. I feel like I'm repeating the same compliments over and over because it's just perfect all-around. Aw, you too kind.

No problem! Whoa, I did make a lot of unnecessary assumptions. Sorry about that. It's a character sketch, and he's already interesting; that's a huge feat in itself. Awesome work. ...

Thank you!!! All your comments were insightful and spot-on, as usual. I'd never have noticed this stuff. Wow, main character needs a name. Totally forgot. I love the lips-fade-bruise-blue suggestion, ...

Thank you!!! I was so worried because I've never explored this genre before. Cliffhangers, too--ugh, most people are natural at them. You're right; it's really, really confusing. XD The idea ...

Haha, thank you! :D

Thanks! :D

True-ish. We're incorporating a bit of fantasy because we couldn't resist.

No problem! ^_^

*is touched* I think I'll retire to more writable pieces now, though. XD