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No problem! Same here :D.

No problem! :D

Thanks :D! Your nitpicks are all spot-on. I'll edit and review your novel tomorrow! Oh, btw, his "illness" will be explained later. I'll try to drop more hints, according to ...

Really? I never knew that :D. No problem! This definitely deserves the Literary Spotlight.

Did you just realize that each of our last four comments contained an ellipsis and emoticon? Don't break the streak :D...

I am getting slightly bored... Off to torture my characters!

Thank you so much! Just replied to the fifth.

Oops. Both of you reviewed an unfinished draft. Does it show up in my portfolio? Thanks anyway, though! You're always so helpful. My original intention was to insert a flashback ...

222 reviews and 550 posts? Someone likes the even numbers :D...

Thanks! Another helpful review! The reason for his illness is revealed at the climax...I hope that's not too long a wait. And, yes, I suppose I have been neglecting Siv. ...

Thanks! :P Sorry you have to go to the trouble...

I'm slightly confused; this's an unfinished draft. Thanks anyway, though :P! Another great, insightful review! Yes, my problem's Siv's undeveloped. But you'd think that I'd prefer writing from her per

Thanks! That's some fast reviewing :D. I agree that speaker's tags would help improve the flow.