GoldFlame

Back again! :D You've this knack for gluing my eyes to the screen. Maybe it's the frequent paragraph breaks, the flow, the well-measured pace, or all three fused. Whatever it ...

Back again! I have been noticing recently that my writing is composed of a lot of thought... Is it overwhelming? You can never have too much reflection. If anything, I've ...

Hey, Sunkissed! Welcome to YWS! It's a tragedy that poets who don't capitalize are tagged ignorant :D. I work primarily with prose, and being a Grammar Nazi, I shouldn't appreciate ...

Hey, Pompadour! I've been waiting for something like this for the longest time. Something that tackles philosophy. Something that doesn't drone on about life and love and friendship and Theseus's ...

Hey, Alex! Here as requested! First off, I can't stop admiring your title :D. I've always struggled with forming paradoxical phrases, or oxymorons, for that matter. And here you've done ...

Hey, Gaurav! Here as requested! This was a pleasant, light read. I love the irony: an atmosphere shadowed by misery, and then all crafted round a humorous theme. The details ...

My eyes are burning. Oh God. I think—no. Not yet. But quite soon. I'm so proud of you! Thirty-one submissions! I remember the first chapter. Months ago, seeing it in ...

Wow. I'm speechless. Wow. Her reaction was perfect. Her rage was spot-on. Everything was described perfectly, in vivid detail. Apollo's death was expected, but still struck the reader hard. If ...

When did I get so behind?! *sobs* *Sorry this was kind of short and boring. Oh, stop being modest. Amazing, as usual :D. I actually enjoy the chapters with less ...

Hey, Laure! Here as requested. Okay, first off, you rendered me speechless. Your descriptions; I—wow. They suited the atmosphere, fit like pieces in a jigsaw puzzle, splashed color to the ...

Back again! I sensed another style shift. The sarcasm screamed, and yet you transitioned smoothly: "The Oak was the worst of them all. " Well-executed. This John guy is not ...

Hey, Nerdbird! A little late, but here nonetheless! You never fail to amaze me. The imagery--I'd steal it if I could. It was so amazingly vivid, but you maintained a ...

Hey, Finn! Been dying for a poem like this. One that touches philosophy, one that investigates time's uncharted areas. Everything you read nowadays concerns suicide, cutting, and negative relationship

Hey, Wordsy! Here as requested! Great job on the transition from Dr. Jekyll to Mr. Hyde. My gaze just skates down the screen, this flows so beautifully. I especially love ...

Hey, Gaurav! I'll make my primary focus grammar, as requested, but yours is great. SushiSashimi's also covered most of my technical nitpicks, so ... well, expect a brief review. :D ...