GoldFlame

Back again! He said he would be waiting in here. I must tell him! Where is he? Internal dialogue should leave room open for interpretation. If it doesn't, it's like ...

Hey, Dude! I'm rusty on reviewing, so heads up, there'll be strangely-phrased phrasings in abundance. He gathered a handful of the dried fodder for the horses to feed on, and ...

Heya, Gaurav! :D I wish I could write a more in-depth review, but I don't have much to say. That's real raw high-quality writing. Pacing, fluency, reaction, both internal and ...

Heya, Gaurav! I'm a bit rusty on reviewing, so heads up, there'll be strangely-phrased phrasings in abundance. Amazing. This spoke like a folktale, with events progressing at electric speeds, a ...

Hey, Silver! I adore this. Writing's a cliché theme, but you took that theme and molded it to suit your personal views. I'll confess, the beginning worried me. I thought ...

Hey, Pomp! You reviewed my novel, so I thought I'd start returning the favor. Unhelpful technical stuff: The cornucopia gleams before me, like the horn of a unicorn -- skewered ...

Hey, Lu! Romanticizing murder. It was infuriating. This was immensely clever. It peeled another layer of Sandrine's personality. Most would be sickened, but she got ... angry. Enraged. I see ...

Heya, Zontafer! I've run dry. I'll do my best, but I've arrived too late. All these amazing reviews ... *faints* Alright, shaking things up a bit. Cons first, then pros ...

Hey, Deanie! Blown away. I set my expectations high, but you still exceeded them. It's genius to launch with scene and conclude with narrative, like a miniscule epilogue: distance yourself ...

Back again! This review's relying on opinion, because ... wow, I loved this. Your skills shone on full display. Especially detail emphasis--nailed it. Zoomed in and out as needed. The ...

Hey, Deanie! Too many amazing reviews. What'll I write? :shock: This chapter proved as enjoyable as the others. But it didn't draw emotion. I feel like you dedicated more to ...

Back again! :D Ooh, awesome title. The narrator's voice's been fluctuating throughout the novel. From what I've observed, you're having trouble solidifying it, although you shouldn't, really. You're a

Flame here! Apologies for ze delay. ;) You never fail to amaze, don't you? I'm angry now because your writing's flawless and there's nothing to nitpick, and here I was, ...

Heya, Cesare! Haha, yes, I've become attracted to your works. They're brief and well-written, a combination I guess I don't encounter often. In all honesty, I preferred this over Vampirial. ...

Hey, Cesare! You've definitely improved from your rookie works. The characters possessed depth, as did the narrator's voice, and your descriptions painted vivid images. However ... grammar. No one enj