GoatQueen

Hahaha thanks so much! I am still working on the story so hopefully I will come out with a part two!

Thanks so much for the review! It is very helpful!

ahhhh! im so sorry! i didnt mean to do this 3 times!

Oh I kinda like this. The story is really simple but it is honest (hahaha see what I did there?). It is realistic and very true to how one feels ...

Oh I kinda like this. The story is really simple but it is honest (hahaha see what I did there?). It is realistic and very true to how one feels ...

I really have enjoyed this story and I hope that you will continue it! I want to know more about this mysterious boy and why the girl is locked in ...

Wow! This poem is very deep and artistic. it provokes deep thoughts and is very well written. It gives clear images and almost made me tear up! This is a ...

This is great! I appreciate your strong word choice and this creates a great image in my mind!